You. Who you are.
What your talents are. What your skills and experiences are.
As some of you may already know, my name is Alejandro
Arteaga and I was born and raised in La Paz, Bolivia. Ever since I was a kid I
was surrounded by two complete opposite realities that crafted and developed
the way I see the world. By one side, I was part of a private school where I
met all of my best friends and where I had the opportunity of learning at a
high level of education. But in our surroundings it was easy to see and
perceive something completely opposite, where there is struggle and poverty and
where really young kids have to start working to provide their families with
some additional resources. As I continued to grow up, I became aware that there
is something I could do to help the people that need our help. All in all, I
developed entrepreneurial skills since high school, an know I can say that I consider
myself a really organized person who is not only focused on achieving
deadlines, but I also believe that it is really important to develop
communication skills in order to be successful. I love soccer and my
aspirations are based on contributing to the development of soccer not only as
a sport, but also as an opportunity for my country. Specifically regarding my
business plan, I believe that we are in the first stage of the business plan
but I like to see this business concept more as a unique experience by the
moment. I think that this class and the business concept that I developed would
be crucial and would play an essential role in my life for future endeavors.
I am offering my customers the option to better manage their
time. We all got the same time, but the only thing that makes us different is
the way we use that time, and I believe that my business plan would help UF
students to have a better and more adjustable way of managing their time when
thinking about transportation. Students should be focused on developing their
knowledge and skills rather than thinking when the bus would come again. But as
described in the previous point, I prefer seeing my business concept as an
amazing experience from which I will learn how to approach and know the unmet
needs that exist all around the world.
Who are you offering
it to?
My customers are all students at the University of Florida,
who live off campus and who have the struggle of either arriving late to the
bus stop, or seeing the bus go away just when they were going to take it. There
are approximately 50 thousand students in the University of Florida, and a
significant portion of this number live off-campus. But I think that this
business plan could be offered especially to the RTS Corporation. I think that this
could improve the type of service that they provide and it could also be seen as
an example for other cities.
Why do they care? The
people who care about my business plan are based on two components:
· The students
care because they want be able to manage their time in better way, and they are
volatile to the use of technology and smartphones applications, so they would
not find this product to be something hard to manage.
· The RTS
should also see my business plan as an opportunity because they are focused on
providing the best service to the people that ride the bus in the city. If
implanted in the right way, they could be an example for other cities and they
would have a competitive advantage among the other competitors in other cities.
What are your core
competencies?
I believe that what sets my business plan apart from every
other bus smartphone application is the fact that it is strictly focused on
providing the customers with innovation that was not yet implemented anywhere
around the country. The customers would feel that they are exclusive and
unique, and I think that Gainesville is a place where innovations occur in a
daily basis (a clear example is Gatorade), and it is our job to keep this pace
as Gators. I will always strive for customer satisfaction, but I think that
another attribute that makes my business plan unique is the fact that it will
be based on the opinion and acceptance of students. Even though there are
surveys about different events that are happening on campus, there are very few
surveys and questionnaires regarding the evaluation of the transportation
services in Gainesville, and this is definitely something I would implement on
a daily basis for this business plan.
How would I make my
customers to keep using my app?
The reason why my customer will keep using my app will be
because there is no service similar to the service that I am offering. My
business will always strive for innovation and ways to improve the bus
transportation in Gainesville, and at the same time it will also be focused on
helping students to be able to invest their time on studying and working rather
than being stressed thinking about the bus and time it will arrive to the bus
stop.
Feedback Memo
From the Idea Napkin #1, I was able to recognize that all of
the feedback was positive, which didn’t gave me the possibility of thinking on
something to improve for my business plan. There was one comment that encouraged
me to think about how I would ensure my customers to come back and keep using
my app. That is why I included this on the Idea Napkin #2. The five main points
that I take from the feedback I received are the following:
1.
Positive
Feedback: The feedback that I received was mostly positive which didn’t
gave me the chance of thinking on improvements on my business plan.
2.
People
related to me and my background: I was able to perceive that some of the
feedback included descriptions of people that grew up in similar conditions as I
did, which gives me a sense of relatedness with them, who at the end will be
potential customers.
3.
I could see
that not everyone takes the bus: The feedback that I received included
comments saying that “they never took the bus” or “I will never take the bus
again” which is critical to my business because my business plan has a complete
relationship with the demand of bus transportation in Gainesville.
4.
How can I
make sure that my customers will keep using my app: I included the strategy
that could help me solve this issue.
5.
Think
about other opportunities using my business plan: I was able to perceive that
some of my feedback included suggestions that I should also focus on thinking
on more than just an app.
Evaluation of my Napkin
Idea
I believe that the elements that compose my business plan
fit together accurately. My customers are already targeted to be a specific
group of people who I believe need this product. However, I believe that I am
missing a key component within the five elements. The aspect that I think I am
missing is the fact that I have no knowledge about the process of making and
creating a smartphone application. This is the core feature of my business plan
and I need to consider for possible solutions to this critical issue. However,
as stated on my Idea Napkin, I believe that my business concept would help the
students and the residents in Gainesville to better manage one of the scarcest
and unrenewable resource that we all have, which is time.
Alejandro, funny thing I am actually proposing a shuttle/ riding service that would better transport student around gainesville than the buses or an Uber would. As far as your app though it does seem like a good idea, however, how will you create demand for it over google who if you set it up on your phone can also send you notifications when the bus is coming and so forth?
ReplyDeletecheck out my post at
http://anicentrepreneur.blogspot.com/2016/03/idea-napkin-no2.html
Alejandro,
ReplyDeleteI would first like to compliment your social awareness. Not only is it clear that you have received a quality education, but you are observant and attentive to your environment. In regards to your business, I can definitely envision a market for you but there are a few questions for you to ponder. For starters, how do you plan on selling your idea to RTS, and, (if successful), what is your long-term plan for expansion? Additionally, what barriers can you build to block off entering competitors from copying your product? Other than that, great job on the detail of your business plan and I look forward to seeing you succeed soon.
I hope my feedback has been helpful. I have attached the link to my blog and would appreciate your input as well.
http://dipaoloent.blogspot.com/2016/03/idea-napkin-no2.html
Best,
Louis DiPaolo Jr
I think this is a great idea! I think you did make a great point about why this is different from other bus apps that dp similar things but I also still think that your biggest issue with it would be that there are also a ton of other apps out there, so yours would really need to be different. I have a similar issue with my pitch too because it is an app also and would have many competitors.
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Hello Alejandro,
ReplyDeleteOur ideas are somewhat in the same field, transportation. I think you have a great thing going! I can tell from your idea that you are very aware of your surroundings which is a great skill for an entrepreneur. You take that awareness and apply it very well. My one questions is how would you make this much different from the google application, although not so well known can do very similar tasks. Aside from that, i greatly appreciate your app and what you are going for. If you'd like to check my idea napkin out you can go here: http://ent3003img.blogspot.com