1)
The pitch.
I decided to extend the length of my elevator pitch
this time because I wanted to include a description of the uniqueness of my
venture and the possible expansion that the venture might have.
2)
A reflection on the feedback you received
from your last pitch and 3) What did you change based on the feedback?
From the feedback I received on the last pitch, I
realized that most of it was positive given the creativeness and the reality of
my pitch. In this case, I decided to incorporate answers
to the questions that my peers asked me which were based on what makes my business
unique and/or a description of a possible expansion of my business plan. Some
of the feedback I received last time was based on the criticizing informality
of my pitch. I will say that the formality depends on what type of audience I
am actually targeting, which for my business are college students. This time I
decided to set my Elevator Pitch on a real “Elevator” and with more “formality”.
Let me know what you think about it.
I really believe that my last elevator pitch
was pretty good, and based on the positive feedback I received last time, I am
including the link to my last Elevator Pitch so you can take a look at it.
Here is the link: http://alejandroentrepreneurship.blogspot.com/2016/02/the-gator-spotter-elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Here is the link: http://alejandroentrepreneurship.blogspot.com/2016/02/the-gator-spotter-elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Alejandro,
ReplyDeleteGreat video. Im kinda confused about the opening "scene" lol. Where your talking into the elevator. If you did want to cut some time off your video, id start there. Other than that i think the video had the full scope of your idea and was to the point. All around great pitch!
Hey Alejandro,
ReplyDeleteGreat job with this elevator speech! I watched one of your previous ones and can easily tell the improvement. Based on the difference of your elevator speech's, answering your peer's questions and going to greater depth with your concepts details significantly helps the viewer understand. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see your next elevator speech!
Check out my post:
http://flytyguy.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hi,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was very entertaining! I do not think it was too long and it was very on topic. Your elevator pitch from last time was great as well. It was professional and to the point!
If you want to check out mine:
http://ericanudelman.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Best,
Erica