The pitch
A reflection on the feedback you
received from your last pitch.
The feedback
that I received from the last pitch was most of all based on congratulating me
for the elevator pitch. I was not able to solve any misunderstood information
or inconvenience that I presented on the last pitch since the feedback I
received was mostly positive. However, I wanted this pitch to be a little more
creative and I decided to go to the actual place where you really feel the
frustration of not catching the bus! I decided this to grab viewer’s attention
and to give the elevator pitch a more realistic aspect. I will be waiting for
your opinions about this pitch, so please take a few minutes to leave a
comment. Thank you very much.
Hey Alejandro,
ReplyDeleteGator Spotter sounds like it would be extremely useful for a lot of the students that live here in Gainesville. I have missed the bus countless times. I really like that you did your elevator pitch exactly where this app would be useful. It was very entertaining and captured my attention. I think the only negative feedback I could give you is that may not be as professional to your elevator pitch this way but I guess it depends on the person you are presenting it to because I liked it.
If you want to see how my second attempt at how my elevator pitch went, here is the link:
http://andreacdona.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no2.html
Hey Alejandro-
ReplyDeleteI really liked your pitch and the reality behind it! I think that your pitch may have been a bit too informal, though. Otherwise, it was a great pitch and you seem to definitely know how you want your product to go. Are you only going to target U.F. students or would you expand to other cities with buses, too?
Our pitches were not really alike, but it seems like we have a similar target customer. Here is the link to my elevator pitch: http://kwallaceent.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Good job!
Katherine
Hey there
ReplyDeleteIt would be great to have this idea implemented ASAP because, I, just like my college brethren, have also missed the bus. Multiple times actually. It is frustrating to sprint to the bus only to see it drive away. I dig the informality of this video as it gives it more life and excitement. Check my blog out:
http://blazingllamas.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-2.html
Hi Alejandro! I really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch, it may have been "informal" but it was unique and your setting served as a more effective means of showing the consumer what your service is all about. As I'm sure every student has experienced or will experience at some point, I have missed the bus many times before and will probably miss it a bunch more times. Overall I think you did a great job of addressing a common problem among students and presented your solution in a way that stands out among other pitches. Here's the link to mine: http://hmilam95.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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